Thursday, July 05, 2007

Nitpicking

What's wrong with this first paragraph?

Shloka Nath, Tejas Mehta
Monday, July 2, 2007 (Mumbai)
As Mumbai got flooded due to incessant rains, it brought back memories of a terrible day two years ago when the city not just came to a stand still but was literally felled to its knees.

1 comment:

  1. "city not just came to a stand still " ... with my 4 paise ka Angrezi knowledge, shouldnt it be "standstill" - a single word ?
    am i making sense, or am i as bad as people who write for NDTV ? :-)

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